Please critique my withdrawal letter Forum

[Snoopy1216]

Try this one instead. It works wonders.

Dear XXXX Law School Admissions Staff,

Over the course of this year’s law school admissions cycle, I have submitted applications to many excellent law schools such as yours. Unfortunately, no matter how compelling the establishment, a student can only attend one of the fine institutions to which they apply. I regret to inform you that you have not been selected for my attendance in the autumn of 2010. Nonetheless, your eminent quality convinces me that you will matriculate other top scholars this fall. My deepest thanks for considering me as a potential student, and best wishes in all of your future endeavors.


Sincerely,
XXXX

*COPY AND PASTED* That's bomb and I'm ready to send.
now if some school i like can take me soon, that's be great

[09042014]

When GULC waitlisted me a day after I withdrew nicely, I replied with

Go ahead and withdraw me.

Desert Fox

[BenJ]

Try this one instead. It works wonders.

Dear XXXX Law School Admissions Staff,

Over the course of this year’s law school admissions cycle, I have submitted applications to many excellent law schools such as yours. Unfortunately, no matter how compelling the establishment, a student can only attend one of the fine institutions to which they apply. I regret to inform you that you have not been selected for my attendance in the autumn of 2010. Nonetheless, your eminent quality convinces me that you will matriculate other top scholars this fall. My deepest thanks for considering me as a potential student, and best wishes in all of your future endeavors.


Sincerely,
XXXX

*COPY AND PASTED* That's bomb and I'm ready to send.
now if some school i like can take me soon, that's be great

Let us know how it goes. , I had fun writing it but would never actually send it.

[Snoopy1216]

When GULC waitlisted me a day after I withdrew nicely, I replied with

Go ahead and withdraw me.

Desert Fox

Hahahha I would like to have seen their faces

[john titor]

what kind of loser sends a withdrawal letter? if you really want to do the people on the waitlist a solid, just call whatever secretary is in the admissions office and say "My name is John Jones, and I'm withdrawing from consideration." Then hang up the damn phone and go do something besides post neurotic crap like this on TLS.

[TTTennis]

Try this one instead. It works wonders.

Dear XXXX Law School Admissions Staff,

This year, due to the effects of the economy, I have submitted more applications than should be allowed. As such, there has been an increase in both the quantity and quality of the schools I have been accepted to. Your offer has received its initial review and I am very impressed with your qualifications. At this point in time though, I am unable to accept your request. I hope you will give my spot to someone who would be more appreciative. My deepest thanks for considering me as a potential student, and best wishes in all of your future endeavors.


Peace Biatch,
XXXX

Fixed.

[calicocat]

Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.

you didn't get into cornell right?

[09042014]

Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.

you didn't get into cornell right?

They knew I had a sense of humor and shit canned my app.

[booby87]

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[calicocat]

Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.

you didn't get into cornell right?

They knew I [strike]had a sense of humor[/strike] was a dumbass and shit canned my app.

ftfy <3

[09042014]

Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.

you didn't get into cornell right?

They knew I [strike]had a sense of humor[/strike] was a dumbass and shit canned my app.

ftfy <3

Minnesota? That's still in Canada.

<3

[calicocat]

Minnesota? That's still in Canada.

<3

NorthwesTTTTTTTTTTTTTern

that's all

<3

[panda]

Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.

hth.

[calicocat]

Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.

hth.

I would have fun with you

[09042014]

Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.

hth.

I would have fun with you

Credited.

[panda]

Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.

hth.

I would have fun with you

<3 let's do it. and then tease DF because he's not invited.

[TTTennis]

Only only thing worse than this poor fucked out joke, is the idiots taking it serious. Have fun at cornell everyone.

hth.

I would have fun with you

Credited.

ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.

[panda]

ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.

who are you?

[calicocat]

I would have fun with you

Credited.

ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.

oh, we've met.

[TTTennis]

ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.

who are you?

Some dude.

[calicocat]

ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.

who are you?

lol credited

[09042014]

hth.

I would have fun with you

Credited.

ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.

Oh we are acquainted. I'm her new life coach. She doesn't know yet though, don't tell her.

[TTTennis]

ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.

who are you?

Who are you? I like your outfit.

[panda]

ITT: Desert Fox meets his counterpart.

who are you?

Who are you? I like your outfit.

creeper.

[09042014]

ITT: 1337 loser exclusion