Why X school Forum

[should-i-do-it]

"blah blah and blah are what makes it the law school I most wish to attend"

how bad does this sound as an ending for a why x school addendum

[McAvoy]

Are you esl

[MidwestLifer]

Come on man it's a 1-page essay, don't mail it in!

[should-i-do-it]

help me out bros, I'm about to say screw it and just send it in, do they even read this shit?

[PeanutsNJam]

"Location, biglaw placement, and hot women are what makes your school the law school I most wish to attend."

sounds ESL as fuck

[should-i-do-it]

"Location, biglaw placement, and hot women are what makes your school the law school I most wish to attend."

sounds ESL as fuck

damn, any suggestions to make is less esl sounding?

[MidwestLifer]

It's one page, so it really should have one constant narrative.
Make the re-affirmation of that narrative your concluding sentence.

[Rigo]

Are you esl

Your tact, wit, and avatar are what makes your posts the posts I most wish to read.

[should-i-do-it]

On an unrelated note, should I put on my app that im retaking in sept or leave it out?

[should-i-do-it]

Also, do employers care if you've got a couple years btw graduating and starting law school and you don't really have anything to show, i've just been traveling/family business

[xylocarp]

Are you esl

Your tact, wit, and avatar are what makes your posts the posts I most wish to read.

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[Skool]

Are you esl

I used to tutor 1st year freshman writing. That's exactly how the average frosh finishes an expository essay. Because everything about law school is a joke, no one will really care. But it might be a nice idea to take more pride in your work, op.