Early App or Better PS? Forum

[TheMostDangerousLG]

For the top 6 schools, which would you recommend: submitting my app earlier, or submitting my app a bit later with a better PS? I currently have what I think is a solid PS, but it's not exactly super personal. The two attorneys where I work recommended adding a bunch of stuff about my own background, and while I admit that it improves the statement, I'm having major trouble bringing it back to the quality of writing of the original statement. I know that at least for Harvard, an earlier app is a major boost. (I also know that Harvard is a pipe dream, but hence why I would need all of the boosts I can get.)

Do you think that the personal statement just needs to show that I'm a competent writer and not completely hateable, or should I take the time to submit one that may be of slightly lower writing caliber but that shows that I've (sort of) faced some adversity?

[bp shinners]

The two attorneys where I work recommended adding a bunch of stuff about my own background

This worries me. It makes me think the statement has become weaker for the inclusion of these things. You don't want a long-form resume, and you don't want to throw a bunch of your background in - just tell one tale, and tell it well.

[t-14orbust]

The two attorneys where I work recommended adding a bunch of stuff about my own background

This worries me. It makes me think the statement has become weaker for the inclusion of these things. You don't want a long-form resume, and you don't want to throw a bunch of your background in - just tell one tale, and tell it well.

Do you ever critique PSs on here? I just finished my first draft and have been looking for some input

[gobosox]

MostDangerous, did you end up re-taking the LSAT? I decided against it.

I was in the same situation with the PS. My solution? Work tirelessly on it. I wrote maybe 20-30 different stories before picking the best and chiseling at it.

They aren't mutually exclusive. You can turn something in early. I'd be willing to trade PS's too, just PM me. If memory serves, we have similar thought processes/credentials.

[Magical Trevor]

Early app given that your newer ps isn't sounding better, especially if even you aren't convinced you've really faced adversity.

[TheMostDangerousLG]

Thanks for the opinions, all. Think I'll probably submit the best version of the modified PS this weekend.

Anyone else have any thoughts before I do?