Is " I am confident that this will increase..." too strong? Is "My experience in...might be of interest to..." too weak?
Should I just go with "I hope that this will increase..."?
Thanks!
diversity statement Forum
- honeybadger12
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Re: diversity statement
Assuming "this" refers to diversity, I wouldn't say any of those. If you're writing a diversity statement, the adcomm will already know you think whatever you're discussing will increase their diversity...Woods wrote:Is " I am confident that this will increase..." too strong? Is "My experience in...might be of interest to..." too weak?
Should I just go with "I hope that this will increase..."?
Thanks!
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Re: diversity statement
What if the school asks how can you contribute to their environment?honeybadger12 wrote:Assuming "this" refers to diversity, I wouldn't say any of those. If you're writing a diversity statement, the adcomm will already know you think whatever you're discussing will increase their diversity...Woods wrote:Is " I am confident that this will increase..." too strong? Is "My experience in...might be of interest to..." too weak?
Should I just go with "I hope that this will increase..."?
Thanks!
- Jaqen
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Re: diversity statement
Don't answer so explicitly imo. Show it, don't say it.Woods wrote:What if the school asks how can you contribute to their environment?
- honeybadger12
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Re: diversity statement
Jaqen wrote:Don't answer so explicitly imo. Show it, don't say it.Woods wrote:What if the school asks how can you contribute to their environment?
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