How does my C&F statement look Forum

dsn32 · Post by **dsn32** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 12:44 pm

Thanks to everyone who helped!

2014 · Post by **2014** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 1:04 pm

Looks fine. People often suggest having a statement conveying regret/growth somewhere which you don't so you might consider that, but if you sent it as is I imagine you would be totally fine.

Swimp · Post by **Swimp** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 1:54 pm

"...myself and a group of friends were discovered..."

That's grammatically incorrect. Otherwise it's fine.

dsn32 · Post by **dsn32** » Fri Aug 17, 2012 2:44 pm

Thanks to you both, two good pieces of advice!

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