MY FULL CRIMINAL RECORD!!! (addendum) - input needed Forum

[3v3ryth1ng]

The following is a C&F addendum I wrote. Those of you with true insight into C&F issues, please read it and let me know if I did it right. Are there any problems with the way I wrote it? Is there a way I could have written it to minimize its damage, or possibly even help my application?

I'm very new to this, so your well-intentioned input or expertise is appreciated!
Thanks TLS!


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Character & Fitness Addendum

Juvenile Record

• In October 2000, I was arrested for and later convicted of driving under the influence of alcohol (DUI), a misdemeanor. I was given probation, a fine, and a yearlong license suspension.

• In October 2000, I was arrested for and later convicted of possession for sale of Marijuana, a felony. I was sentenced to 60 days of juvenile detention and 2 years of probation. In addition, I was fined, required to attend Narcotics Anonymous meetings, and had my driving privileges suspended for an additional year. The conviction was later reduced from felony to misdemeanor through a 17b motion, and subsequently expunged.

I committed these offenses during a particularly tumultuous period in my life. However, I chose to learn from these mistakes, and shortly thereafter, I quit drugs and drinking permanently. My desire to misbehave dissipated with maturity. I have since led a productive life, and I currently have 11 years sobriety.

Adult Record

• On August 25, 2003, I was issued a citation for violating our city’s dog leash law when my dog escaped overnight. I paid the fine and made sure my dog never escaped again.

• On January 21, 2004, I was issued a traffic ticket for failing to stop at a stop sign. I completed traffic school for the offense.

• On December 29, 2004 I was issued a “fix-it” ticket for having expired registration tags on my car. I submitted proof of correction and the ticket was dismissed.

• On July 6, 2006, I was issued a ticket for failing to make a compete stop at a red light. I completed traffic school for the offense.

• On June 8, 2008, I was issued a “fix-it” ticket for having a burned-out taillight on my car. I submitted proof of correction and the ticket was dismissed.

• On April 5, 2008, I was issued a traffic ticket for driving over the posted speed limit. I did not contest, and I paid the fine.

• On December 9, 2008, I was cited for driving without a valid driver’s license. I was unaware that my license had expired because DMV notices were being sent to my old address. I took immediate action and renewed my license the same day. However, I was found guilty of the charge, a misdemeanor.

• On November 4, 2009, I was issued a traffic ticket for talking on a cell phone while driving. I completed traffic school for the offense.

• On November 30, 2009, I was issued a “fix-it” ticket for having a burned out taillight and expired registration tags. I submitted proof of correction and both charges were dismissed.

I make no excuses for these offenses. I have taken all necessary corrective actions, and I am actively working to prevent similar offenses in the future (fixing broken taillights, paying fees in a timely manner, driving responsibly, etc.). I don’t believe these offenses should be viewed as a reflection of my character.

[bk1]

On December 9, 2008, I was cited for driving without a valid driver’s license. I was unaware that my license had expired because DMV notices were being sent to my old address. I took immediate action and renewed my license the same day. However, I was found guilty of the charge, a misdemeanor.

Isn't the expiration date printed on the license? If so I would definitely not use this excuse.

[3v3ryth1ng]

On December 9, 2008, I was cited for driving without a valid driver’s license. I was unaware that my license had expired because DMV notices were being sent to my old address. I took immediate action and renewed my license the same day. However, I was found guilty of the charge, a misdemeanor.

Isn't the expiration date printed on the license? If so I would definitely not use this excuse.

Shit, I guess it is! I never paid attention to it since I never had to worry about it until then. Silly/stupid me. Excellent point, and I will definitely write something else for that. Any suggestions on how I should address it? Everything I've said is true, even the part about the notices.



How's it look otherwise?

[UMiamiCane]

Do the schools you are applying to require you to disclose minor non-moving violations like the fix-it tickets, minor traffic infractions like stop signs, and city ordinance violations like the leash law? If not, I would leave all of those out.

[soitgoes9]

Do the schools you are applying to require you to disclose minor non-moving violations like the fix-it tickets, minor traffic infractions like stop signs, and city ordinance violations like the leash law? If not, I would leave all of those out.

+1 if not needed then i would omit them

[geauxsaints]

Since your offenses occurred as a juvenile, I would include the school year you were in during your arrest. For example...

In October 2000, during my senior year of high school, I was arrested for and later convicted of ....


I think that doing this will re-emphasize that you were a juvenile during the arrest.

Also, take the word "drugs" out of your explanation. "Drugs" sound much worse than marijuana.

However, I chose to learn from these mistakes, and shortly thereafter, I quit drugs marijuana and drinking permanently.

[oaken]

Maybe you're just leaving them out for TLS, but definitely include the locations of the violations as well

[JoeMo]

Do the schools you are applying to require you to disclose minor non-moving violations like the fix-it tickets, minor traffic infractions like stop signs, and city ordinance violations like the leash law? If not, I would leave all of those out.

+1 if not needed then i would omit them

+2, I asked some schools and they told me they didn't need them. They only needed arrests. Nothing that was disposed of by paying a fine. I asked others and they wanted everything. Like George Mason.

[3v3ryth1ng]

Maybe you're just leaving them out for TLS, but definitely include the locations of the violations as well

Locations? Should I have city/state, or would county suffice?

Also, do they check up on this stuff? Like, if I accidentally put the wrong city or missed a long-forgotten fix-it ticket, how would that affect me?

[3v3ryth1ng]

Do the schools you are applying to require you to disclose minor non-moving violations like the fix-it tickets, minor traffic infractions like stop signs, and city ordinance violations like the leash law? If not, I would leave all of those out.

+1 if not needed then i would omit them

+2, I asked some schools and they told me they didn't need them. They only needed arrests. Nothing that was disposed of by paying a fine. I asked others and they wanted everything. Like George Mason.

Thanks for that advice!
I will make a couple versions of this- one with everything, one without fix-its, one without tickets altogether.

[JoeMo]

Maybe you're just leaving them out for TLS, but definitely include the locations of the violations as well

Locations? Should I have city/state, or would county suffice?

Also, do they check up on this stuff? Like, if I accidentally put the wrong city or missed a long-forgotten fix-it ticket, how would that affect me?

If they require it to apply to the law school it's because they require it to be admitted to the bar in that state. When you go to apply to the bar, you can't lie to those people. You'll have to get a full driving history etc...

So if your law school wanted you to omit minor driving offenses then they won't care if you didn't disclose it. But if your school wanted you to disclose them and you didn't, then it becomes a headache. You have to go back to the dean and get a certification that if you had disclosed they would still admit you. And most of the time they end up giving it to you but you still look like a d-bag in the process.

[3v3ryth1ng]

If they require it to apply to the law school it's because they require it to be admitted to the bar in that state. When you go to apply to the bar, you can't lie to those people. You'll have to get a full driving history etc...

So if your law school wanted you to omit minor driving offenses then they won't care if you didn't disclose it. But if your school wanted you to disclose them and you didn't, then it becomes a headache. You have to go back to the dean and get a certification that if you had disclosed they would still admit you. And most of the time they end up giving it to you but you still look like a d-bag in the process.

One reason I'm asking is because the full driving histories and background checks require money/fingerprints, then a 2 week wait. I think I have everything, but there's a slight chance I may have missed something. Hell, I didn't actually even know about the dog leash ticket existed (I wasn't even living there- I guess my mom received the ticket and paid it).

So they would go back and compare what I disclosed to the law school and what I disclosed to the bar?

[JoeMo]

One reason I'm asking is because the full driving histories and background checks require money/fingerprints, then a 2 week wait. I think I have everything, but there's a slight chance I may have missed something. Hell, I didn't actually even know about the dog leash ticket existed (I wasn't even living there- I guess my mom received the ticket and paid it).

So they would go back and compare what I disclosed to the law school and what I disclosed to the bar?

Unfortunately, yes. They look at what you disclosed in the application to the law school you ultimately attended and what you included on your bar app. Anything that doesn't sit well with them gets questioned.