Any suggestions for this Disciplinary Addendum? Forum

[egeffin]

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What do you guys think?

Anything I should omit / add?

Ill take all the help I can get

[bdubs]

I would like to briefly address the disciplinary action that I indicated I was subject to on my application. During the first the semester of my undergraduate freshman year I was put on disciplinary probation for illegally consuming alcohol in my residential college as well as being in a room with another student who was committing the same infraction (my university considers this “tolerance” of an infraction and is against its code of conduct). I can honestly say that I learned from this embarrassing situation retained a clear disciplinary and academic record for the remainder of my four year undergraduate career. I am sure that I will maintain this since clean record to your institution if I am fortunate enough to be accepted.

What do you guys think?

Anything I should omit / add?

Ill take all the help I can get

I would remove the word illegally unless it is documented as such on your disciplinary record. Adcoms already know that underage drinking is not legal.