please read my PS

[angelmalibu]

I have rewritten this PS like 10 times, spent 50+ hours on it, I now have 2 versions bc I swear its word vomit. I sent #1 in already to my top 3 schools (RIP) and in a mini freak out I started on version #2 and I am wondering if im wasting my time.

If someone could read my #1 statement and tell me whether its good to go/minor improvements, or if its so bad that admissions will burn my app and call me only to laugh in my face for sending it in?

[CanadianWolf]

I will critique your law school PS if you send it to me via DM / PM.

[angelmalibu]

it wont let me send a message because I am still new to this site >;(