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gytc
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JazzyMac
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Re: Final Draft PS...Anyone Interested in Reading?
Have this on my "to read", I will get back with you soon.
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JazzyMac
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Re: Final Draft PS...Anyone Interested in Reading?
Sorry I've taken so long to get back to you.
This is a very nice essay. It kept my attention the entire time, and the topic was interesting.
There is a sentence where you say you "worked hard for two weeks". I know what you meant, but I would remove that sentence from the essay. I think the assumption here is that you would work all the time, not just for two weeks.
This is a very nice essay. It kept my attention the entire time, and the topic was interesting.
There is a sentence where you say you "worked hard for two weeks". I know what you meant, but I would remove that sentence from the essay. I think the assumption here is that you would work all the time, not just for two weeks.
