Hello friends and family. I just finished the first rough draft that I don't think is utter horseshit and I'd like to hear whether you agree and your wisdom and such.
I don't want to post it publicly, so if you're down post in here and I'll PM you. I'd be glad to return the favor if you'd like.
Thanks in advance!
Private feedback please Forum
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Babum
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Would love to help.
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LikelyThrowaway
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Thank you! PM'd.Babum wrote:Would love to help.
Still accepting eager applicants
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Baby Gaga
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I'd also like to swap, I'm on a 3rd draft
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34iplaw
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I'm not quite to the point of a super finalized draft, but I'd be glad to look at yours and I'll shoot you mine in a few days/when I get to spend some more time on it or something if you'd like. (Basically, a time delayed swap) I was doing a lot of advice on this forum, but I tend to go pretty in depth so it was eating up too much time. I will be really disappointed though if I read it and there is no mention of...Baby Gaga wrote:I'd also like to swap, I'm on a 3rd draft
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Thewanderer
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I would like to swap with you as well. I have been struggling but think I have a lot of quality in mine. Send yours over and I will send you mine. Talk to you soon.LikelyThrowaway wrote:Thank you! PM'd.Babum wrote:Would love to help.
Still accepting eager applicants
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KatCoco
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I'd be glad to give it a look, send it over. 
