PS draft -- too preachy? Forum

fitzwilliam · Post by **fitzwilliam** » Thu Aug 11, 2016 11:03 am

Thanks for the feedback. It's back to the drawing board!

sp5000 · Post by **sp5000** » Thu Aug 11, 2016 11:32 am

Do not use this PS.

emkay625 · Post by **emkay625** » Thu Aug 11, 2016 12:43 pm

I'm not sure it really seems like a PS. What you've written here is an essay that makes me think this organization is really great. But the organization isn't applying to law school. You are. I don't learn enough about you, why I should want to admit you, stories about you, why you want to go to law school, obstacles you've overcome, etc. (A PS doesn't need to do all of these things, but it should do one/some.)

encore1101 · Post by **encore1101** » Thu Aug 11, 2016 1:19 pm

I agree with MK. This PS is like, 80% praising the org and 20% about you.

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