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Re: Are my opening paragraphs too off-putting? + Need some directional advice

Post by mukol » Tue Jul 12, 2016 2:01 pm

Yes, they are. IMO if you have to ask you already know the answer.
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Re: Are my opening paragraphs too off-putting? + Need some directional advice

Post by Anonymous User » Tue Jul 12, 2016 3:19 pm

mukol wrote:
Anonymous User wrote:
Are these paragraphs too off-putting, or too sob-story?

Yes, they are. IMO if you have to ask you already know the answer.
Thank you. Would you mind de-quoting?
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