Second Personal Statement, First draft Forum

[Anonymous User]

So I posted on here a couple of weeks ago, but after emailing one of the law schools that I am reapplying to, it seems that they were leaning towards a completely rewritten personal statement. I am a reapplicant, and not currently in school, so I don't have the writing resources I did the first time around, so if anyone would be willing to look over my personal statement, I would really appreciate the help!