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Anonymous User · Post by **Anonymous User** » Mon Nov 02, 2015 4:08 am

Ok, thanks guys.

Anonymous User · Post by **Anonymous User** » Mon Nov 02, 2015 10:52 pm

Any thoughts guys? Worth working on further or scrap it?

fats provolone · Post by **fats provolone** » Mon Nov 02, 2015 11:31 pm

similar to what I told the esports guy, use it as a hook to get into your actual story about why you want to go to LS or at least to talk about yourself and what you're about rather than bragging about accomplishments

also hooly shit neckbeard trifecta right?

CanadianWolf · Post by **CanadianWolf** » Mon Nov 02, 2015 11:38 pm

Scrap it. Doesn't paint a positive picture, in my opinion. I don't want to be rude, but it suggests a lack of maturity. Weak theme.

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