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heycharlie1 · Post by **heycharlie1** » Tue Oct 20, 2015 8:39 pm

Ciao.

Stardust84 · Post by **Stardust84** » Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:00 pm

Have you worked on a particularly interesting assignment that was challenging? If so you could base your personal statement on that and tie it in with the analytical and research skills and how that makes you an ideal candidate for law school.

pleadthafif · Post by **pleadthafif** » Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:05 pm

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lacrossebrother · Post by **lacrossebrother** » Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:05 pm

I'm not more or less convinced about your ability to succeed as a law student or a lawyer after reading that. Are you?

heycharlie1 · Post by **heycharlie1** » Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:07 pm

pleadthafif wrote:I'm a little confused, are you able to be diagnosed with vitiligo without showing symptoms? You said you were diagnosed when you were young but your PS reads like you're already an adult when the condition appears.

My error. I consider myself young two years ago.

I was diagnosed at 21.

heycharlie1 · Post by **heycharlie1** » Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:08 pm

lacrossebrother wrote:I'm not more or less convinced about your ability to succeed as a law student or a lawyer after reading that. Are you?

I have not written it all yet. It's just a beginning, which was what I was hoping to get some feedback on. In the end, it will portray that.

lacrossebrother · Post by **lacrossebrother** » Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:11 pm

heycharlie1 wrote:
lacrossebrother wrote:I'm not more or less convinced about your ability to succeed as a law student or a lawyer after reading that. Are you?
I have not written it all yet. It's just a beginning, which was what I was hoping to get some feedback on. In the end, it will portray that.

Why do you need help with the beginning? You don't want to waste the thirty minutes it'll take to tell a compelling story with a middle and an end of the beginning stinks?

heycharlie1 · Post by **heycharlie1** » Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:14 pm

lacrossebrother wrote:
heycharlie1 wrote:
lacrossebrother wrote:I'm not more or less convinced about your ability to succeed as a law student or a lawyer after reading that. Are you?
I have not written it all yet. It's just a beginning, which was what I was hoping to get some feedback on. In the end, it will portray that.
Why do you need help with the beginning? You don't want to waste the thirty minutes it'll take to tell a compelling story with a middle and an end of the beginning stinks?

Lol.. Chill.

I don't know about you but to me the beginning and the ending are two of the most important parts. If you dont agree, that's fine. No need to bash on my question. Just don't reply.

lacrossebrother · Post by **lacrossebrother** » Tue Oct 20, 2015 9:27 pm

I'm just saying that you should probably write the whole thing out if you want decent criticism.

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