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Rough Draft of PS

Post by CambrianExplosives » Mon Sep 14, 2015 5:07 pm

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I redid a few drafts tonight so this one is very out of date, and I'm going to go ahead and delete it.
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Re: Rough Draft of PS

Post by Scalvert » Mon Sep 14, 2015 5:39 pm

I think the topic is fine. It could use a lot of editing -and maybe moving some information around within the essay- but if you're asking strictly about content, I think you're on the right track.
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Re: Rough Draft of PS

Post by CambrianExplosives » Tue Sep 15, 2015 2:47 am

Scalvert wrote:I think the topic is fine. It could use a lot of editing -and maybe moving some information around within the essay- but if you're asking strictly about content, I think you're on the right track.
Thanks for that. I've gone ahead and changed quite a bit and will probably post the new one sometime in the near future for more edits. :D
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