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Anonymous User
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CanadianWolf
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Re: Work Experience PS - Draft Two
"...a practical reigning of commissions..." doesn't read well.
The company's points regarding seniority, union dues & inflexible schedules seem reasonable to me. Why do you consider them to be "over the top" ?
This PS may portray you as inexperienced, emotional & a bit immature as your arguments against the anti-union video are unconvincing, in my opinion.
The company's points regarding seniority, union dues & inflexible schedules seem reasonable to me. Why do you consider them to be "over the top" ?
This PS may portray you as inexperienced, emotional & a bit immature as your arguments against the anti-union video are unconvincing, in my opinion.
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Scalvert
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Re: Work Experience PS - Draft Two
Might reword to this: I began to educate myself on union representation, something of which I had little previous knowledge.
