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Very rough draft (not applying this cycle)

Post by Anonymous User » Wed Nov 12, 2014 2:58 am

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Re: Very rough draft (not applying this cycle)

Post by kwabbs » Fri Nov 14, 2014 3:58 am

This PS is mostly about your brother.. I think you could re-write just based off your assault and your work experience that evolved from the assault alone and completely cut out your brother from it all together.
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Re: Very rough draft (not applying this cycle)

Post by Anonymous User » Fri Nov 14, 2014 1:43 pm

Ah, that was my concern too but thought details should be provided and then in the end state how this affected me to pursue law school.

But thank you!
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Re: Very rough draft (not applying this cycle)

Post by Anonymous User » Fri Nov 14, 2014 3:29 pm

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Re: Very rough draft (not applying this cycle)

Post by mist4bison » Sun Nov 16, 2014 1:15 am

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