quick grammar question Forum

[valen]

Hey TLS, which is correct? Bolded part is what I am questioning.

“Eugh, what is that smell?”. I froze. That was it; that was the sound of a centuries old Zoroastrian tradition being reduced into one simple, horrifically embarrassing question.

“Eugh, what is that smell?” I froze. That was it; that was the sound of a centuries old Zoroastrian tradition being reduced into one simple, horrifically embarrassing question.

[A. Nony Mouse]

Second one.

[fundamentallybroken]

Second. And drop the semicolon. Turn it into two sentences.

[encore1101]

Second. And drop the semicolon. Turn it into two sentences.

+1

[valen]

Second. And drop the semicolon. Turn it into two sentences.

Done and done, thanks all