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valen

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quick grammar question

Post by valen » Fri Nov 07, 2014 11:36 pm

Hey TLS, which is correct? Bolded part is what I am questioning.

“Eugh, what is that smell?”. I froze. That was it; that was the sound of a centuries old Zoroastrian tradition being reduced into one simple, horrifically embarrassing question.

“Eugh, what is that smell?” I froze. That was it; that was the sound of a centuries old Zoroastrian tradition being reduced into one simple, horrifically embarrassing question.
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Re: quick grammar question

Post by A. Nony Mouse » Fri Nov 07, 2014 11:43 pm

Second one.
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Re: quick grammar question

Post by fundamentallybroken » Fri Nov 07, 2014 11:56 pm

Second. And drop the semicolon. Turn it into two sentences.
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Re: quick grammar question

Post by encore1101 » Sat Nov 08, 2014 12:03 am

fundamentallybroken wrote:Second. And drop the semicolon. Turn it into two sentences.
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Re: quick grammar question

Post by valen » Sat Nov 08, 2014 12:06 am

fundamentallybroken wrote:Second. And drop the semicolon. Turn it into two sentences.
Done and done, thanks all
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