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Personal Statement Rough Attempt

Post by Anonymous User » Sun Nov 02, 2014 10:01 pm

I decided to scrap it.
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Re: Personal Statement Rough Attempt

Post by Gefuehlsecht » Mon Nov 03, 2014 12:39 pm

I don't know. The first half might be more compelling if you could drum up some more concrete examples about what you did during your father's absence. Note that I use the word father, I suggest you adopt that term in your writing. The second half is a lot of fluff without much substance. I don't learn a lot about you there.
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