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Another critique my PS post

Post by Anonymous User » Mon Sep 22, 2014 3:37 pm

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Re: Another critique my PS post

Post by lawschool2014hopeful » Sun Sep 28, 2014 1:46 pm

There is no natural connection between your struggle story and wanting to be a lawyer. I would write one of the stories.
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