proofread my addendum please? Forum
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Anonymous User
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proofread my addendum please?
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criminaltheory
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Re: C&F addendum critique please!
Looks good. Personally I'm curious about why you were found not-responsible, but unless there's a great reason you were actually not responsible I wouldn't go into further detail about it. If you were let off on a technicality or something, this is all you need.
That said, you switch between 'accountable' and 'responsible' in the explanation. Use whatever the formal adjudication was.
That said, you switch between 'accountable' and 'responsible' in the explanation. Use whatever the formal adjudication was.
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Re: C&F addendum critique please!
oh good catch! i'll be sure to fix that!
anybody else, comments/thoughts/suggestions?
anybody else, comments/thoughts/suggestions?
Last edited by Anonymous User on Fri Sep 19, 2014 1:29 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: C&F addendum critique please!
bump
should i shorten it? i don't want to be too wordy
should i shorten it? i don't want to be too wordy
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