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janborn

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looking for advice on this draft, i think it's almost there

Post by janborn » Sun Aug 31, 2014 10:57 am

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lawschool2014hopeful

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Re: looking for advice on this draft, i think it's almost there

Post by lawschool2014hopeful » Sun Sep 28, 2014 1:53 pm

You need someone to check your grammar for sure. The whole miscarriage story is way too long. Your conviction made you sound like a fanatic rather than a reasonable person seeking change.
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Jack_Sheridan

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Re: looking for advice on this draft, i think it's almost there

Post by Jack_Sheridan » Fri Oct 03, 2014 1:04 am

I second that! Grammar is a consistent issue in this write up.. Poor grammar can be repelling :?
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