yale 250 sketch Forum
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Anonymous User
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yale 250 sketch
SNIP for privacy reasons
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jerseymike
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Re: yale 250 sketch
I can't say that I love the topic. It doesn't teach me anything interesting nor does it hold my attention. And the writing is not good enough for a 250; for example, you use semicolons incorrectly twice in the first paragraph.
It seems like you're trying too hard and it comes off as unnatural.
It seems like you're trying too hard and it comes off as unnatural.
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Anonymous User
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Re: yale 250 sketch
EDIT: too much info
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gentlemanscholar
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Re: yale 250 sketch
Is the double bass applying to law school?
Jk. It is an interesting passage, but doesn't say much about you.
Jk. It is an interesting passage, but doesn't say much about you.
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Cicero76
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Re: yale 250 sketch
This topic could be really cute and interesting if it wasn't trying so damn hard
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Pancakes12
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Re: yale 250 sketch
To be fair a yale 250 doesn't need to be about the writergentlemanscholar wrote:Is the double bass applying to law school?
Jk. It is an interesting passage, but doesn't say much about you.
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Anonymous User
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Re: yale 250 sketch
Alright, back to the drawing board for me. Thanks for the input everyone.
