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A two-way street

Post by Anonymous User » Mon Jul 28, 2014 11:11 am

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Re: A two-way street

Post by gentlemanscholar » Mon Jul 28, 2014 11:50 am

This sentence seems out of place.

"Leaders walk a fine line between being overbearing and being callous towards the needs of others."
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Re: A two-way street

Post by Anonymous User » Tue Jul 29, 2014 4:46 pm

gentlemanscholar wrote:This sentence seems out of place.

"Leaders walk a fine line between being overbearing and being callous towards the needs of others."

Thank you for the feedback. Disregarding grammar/language, does what I'm saying seem to fit the bill for a Law School PS? Just want to make sure I'm not way off.
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Re: A two-way street

Post by gentlemanscholar » Tue Jul 29, 2014 5:50 pm

You do a good job of explaining how a formative previous experience shaped your current self, especially leadership qualities. From what i've heard, this is something that adcomms like to see.

I think it could be made more effective if you tied your interest in law school into your narrative.
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