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Post by Anonymous User » Mon Jul 07, 2014 3:06 pm

thanks, ill try and connect it more
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Re: Personal Statement Critique. Yay or Nay?

Post by redsox » Mon Jul 07, 2014 3:14 pm

1) You left one of the company names in.
2) You don't really relate any of this to law school. You just assert at the end of each story, without explanation, that it gave you skills to succeed in law school.
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