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Please critique.

Post by Anonymous User » Sat May 10, 2014 2:04 am

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Nebby

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Re: Please critique.

Post by Nebby » Sat May 10, 2014 6:43 am

Too long.
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Baby_Got_Feuerbach

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Re: Please critique.

Post by Baby_Got_Feuerbach » Sat May 10, 2014 1:13 pm

tl;dr - except the last line

Cut "perfect candidate for admission."
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