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Non-traditional Diversity Statement - thoughts?

Post by Anonymous User » Mon Feb 03, 2014 9:58 pm

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Re: Non-traditional Diversity Statement - thoughts?

Post by papercut » Tue Feb 04, 2014 2:42 am

You need to flush out your struggles a bit more. You get to the solution too quickly.

Right now it sounds like you just started jogging and using "alternative medicine" and the problem went away. I think you should drop Bikram Yoga^TM from your essay. It sounds too much like alternative medicine.

Did you try medication? What were the side effects? Did it even work? Did you try other medication? Cognitive therapy?

You get the point.
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Re: Non-traditional Diversity Statement - thoughts?

Post by Anonymous User » Tue Feb 04, 2014 3:34 am

Deleted -- thanks again.
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