If anyone would be willing to look over my personal and diversity statements, PM me!
Both drafts are very rough and I intend to spend a considerable amount of time editing and playing with the sentence structures, but I am hoping for a third party opinion about the content as well as any feedback you may have about the statement structure, tone, etc.
Any and all suggestions are appreciated. I have so much to write about, but I'm struggling with conveying my story effectively. My PS introduction is giving me an especially hard time! I don't think an anecdote is the best avenue, but I can't seem to come up with a strong hook. The struggle is real.
Thanks for reading!
Personal and Diversity Statement Critique -Controversial Forum
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LoveforLaw341
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fpustorino
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Re: Personal and Diversity Statement Critique -Controversial
You can message it to me. I would be happy to look over it.
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Lwoods1020
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Re: Personal and Diversity Statement Critique -Controversial
fpustorino wrote:You can message it to me. I would be happy to look over it.
ditto
