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#1 or #2?

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1
33%
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67%
 
Total votes: 3

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Two versions, could really use some input!

Post by bisanch » Sat Dec 28, 2013 6:54 pm

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Re: Two versions, could really use some input!

Post by lastsamurai » Tue Dec 31, 2013 11:06 am

Honestly I don't find either of them overly compelling. I think what is lacking is a real picture of who you are aside from the guy in the middle of arguments. That said, option 2 was better for me because it didn't go too far into the details that don't matter (i.e. your friend's names that were having the argument).

Good luck!

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