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Re: DS, trying to send this out today..how does it look?
just my opinion, but I think the last sentence is kind of implied by the fact that you're writing a DS.
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Re: DS, trying to send this out today..how does it look?
fairly weak/obvious PS. It tell me nothing other than what I will already know. You are an immigrant, and you went to different schools. You didnt provide any examples as to how you suffered/overcame those cultural differences other than an "eventually"