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Please critique: two versions of PS, which is better?

Post by Anonymous User » Wed Nov 13, 2013 11:25 am

I have revised my first draft and come up with a second one, but a friend of mine thinks the original one is better. I personally prefer the second. Could someone give me some advice on which one is better? Thank you very much!
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