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Post by jac101689 » Sat Nov 09, 2013 2:47 pm

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Re: Whadda y'all think?

Post by lawschool2014hopeful » Sat Nov 09, 2013 2:54 pm

This statement does not any sort of logical progression. After reading the first 2 paragraphs I had no idea what the purpose of the statement was or any of the information provided. It honestly just seems like a long ramble, go back to the drawing board and clarify the purpose of your statement.
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Re: Whadda y'all think?

Post by jac101689 » Sat Nov 09, 2013 2:59 pm

Do you think any part of it is worth preserving?
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