Too short? Forum
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Anonymous User
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Too short?
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Last edited by Anonymous User on Sat Oct 12, 2013 7:23 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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lastsamurai
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Re: Too short?
Well, you've certainly changed this topic around a few times since the first draft I read. This is fine but not necessarily compelling for me. I liked the part about climbing the hill and your grandmother's house (that was you, right?). Also, for only 650 words, it seems a bit odd that you used "my early life" 7 times
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rinkrat19
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Re: Too short?
It's two pages, double-spaced TNR 12pt, 1" margins. Perfect for schools that want a 2-page PS. For schools that want a 2-3 page, I think I'd try to get at least half a paragraph onto the third page. Couple more sentences. (I didn't read it, so I'm purely going off length.)
Edited because I'm an idiot.
Edited because I'm an idiot.
