PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD: critique my first draft. Forum

Balthy · Post by **Balthy** » Thu Jul 11, 2013 7:39 pm

Anyone want to take a look at my PS? Corrections/opinions/advice is much appreciated.

Let me know if you have the time and I'll PM you.

Thanks

Edit: Accidentally wrote "PT" in the title, but I'm a goof and don't know how to change that now.
Edit 2: SUCCESS! I've changed the title.
Edit 3: Changed title yet again to reflect my desperation.

Balthy · Post by **Balthy** » Fri Jul 12, 2013 2:21 am

Bump, in case there are any night owls out there willing to help out. Otherwise, I may just have to copy and paste the thing on here.. didn't want to, but that seems to get more bites.

Balthy · Post by **Balthy** » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:51 pm

Ok, now I'm getting desperate. No one?

I guess I could always sell a kidney and hire a professional.

rinkrat19 · Post by **rinkrat19** » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:53 pm

Post it (anonymously if you want) in the PS forum and you'll probably have better luck.

Balthy · Post by **Balthy** » Fri Jul 12, 2013 4:55 pm

rinkrat19 wrote:Post it (anonymously if you want) in the PS forum and you'll probably have better luck.

Yeah, I might have to do that. Thanks.

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