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Post by Anonymous User » Tue Jan 15, 2013 4:17 pm

thank you :)
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Re: Submitting soon - Please critique my personal statement!

Post by bluepenguin » Tue Jan 15, 2013 5:13 pm

P1 is pushing it in terms of relevance. P2 has no business being in your PS. Get that professor to write it in a LOR. If it's in a LOR, it doesn't need to be in here. If it isn't verified by a LOR, it does nothing for you (except make them ask why this professor isn't writing you a LOR or mentioning this).
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Re: Submitting soon - Please critique my personal statement!

Post by basketball law guy » Tue Jan 15, 2013 5:22 pm

Agree with above evaluation, plus it is somewhat boring. I have a feeling there is a really good personal story behind this story- perhaps expand on your personal journey and take it to the next level. Good luck.
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