Personal Statement: I can take constructive criticism Forum
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Aawaldrop
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Personal Statement: I can take constructive criticism
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miz
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Re: Personal Statement: I can take constructive criticism
My only comment is that while your passage is well written, it does not move me in a great way. A way in which I believe an admission committee needs to be moved. Throw some beef in there. I just think it is a little touchy feely. Tell them what is really on your mind-unless that is it. Just sayin. I think they want more substance. I have no basis other than my gut.
