Updated Statement--Tear it Apart Forum
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Anonymous User
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Updated Statement--Tear it Apart
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eerie_erie
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Re: Updated Statement--Tear it Apart
I think the introduction runs a bit long. I say this because I would love to hear more about the projects that you have done. This might help you be more persuasive when you say that your past makes you interested in public interest law for the future (I also believe "public interest" is not capitalized). Also, the last sentence strikes me more as what GW can give you, as opposed to what you can "contribute positively" to GW.
