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Does this sound better?
On May 18, 2010, I pleaded guilty to violating ______ University's Code of Academic Integrity by cheating on the final exam for _________________ (ABC 2000) class.
Although I understand that there is no excuse for cheating or academic dishonesty, I suffered from Generalized Anxiety Disorder at the time. I had not received any treatment at this point because even though I was attending counseling sessions, I was not diagnosed with the disorder yet. Regardless, the decision I made on the exam was wrong. My professor was understanding of my circumstances, however, and I was only given a grade punishment for the exam.
On December 10, 2010, I was diagnosed with Generalized Anxiety Disorder. I received treatment from the university health services, and have been able to control my anxiety under academic and non-academic pressure alike. The incident mentioned above was my first and only violation of the Code, and I remained in good standing until graduation.
It looks much better. Here are a few suggested changes, feel free to implement them at your discretion.
On May 18, 2010, I pleaded guilty to violating ______ University's Code of Academic Integrity by cheating on the final exam for _________________ (ABC 2000) class.
Although I understand that there is no excuse for cheating or academic dishonesty, I suffered from Generalized Anxiety Disorder at the time. I had not received any treatment at this point because even though I was attending counseling sessions, I was not
yet diagnosed with the disorder
yet. Regardless, the decision I made on the exam was wrong.
My professor was understanding of my circumstances, however, and I was only given a grade punishment for the exam.
On December 10, 2010, I was After being diagnosed with Generalized Anxiety Disorder
., I received treatment
from the university health services, and have
since been able to control my anxiety under academic and non-academic pressure alike. The incident mentioned above was my first and only violation of the Code, and I remained in good standing until graduation.