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Anonymous User · Post by **Anonymous User** » Sat Nov 10, 2012 4:45 pm

no insight

CanadianWolf · Post by **CanadianWolf** » Sat Nov 10, 2012 5:27 pm

This is not a good law school PS because it offers no insights into you or your development. This is a simple "I did this, I did that" piece which should be in your resume, not in your law school personal statement.

jhertirac · Post by **jhertirac** » Sat Nov 10, 2012 5:29 pm

CanadianWolf wrote:This is not a good law school PS because it offers no insights into you or your development. This is a simple "I did this, I did that" piece which should be in your resume, not in your law school personal statement.

ChikaBoom · Post by **ChikaBoom** » Sat Nov 10, 2012 5:54 pm

The above is true. You start to give us a bit of a picture as to the type of person you are, but then you continue to give the run down of your resume. I'd pick either the stepping or the RA thing if you're committed to these topics and then further develop them by picking out a specific event or instance that gives us more of an idea about your character and actions.

But, cool deal on the stepping thing. It looks interesting.

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