Addendum- Character and Fitness Forum
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h2opolo
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Addendum- Character and Fitness
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justonemoregame
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Re: Addendum- Character and Fitness
This is way too long. Just summarize the offense. Mention what you did to make up for it, say nothing has happened since, done.
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mmbt123
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Re: Addendum- Character and Fitness
agreed ^. you need to address the offense first. i had no idea what i was reading for the first several sentences.
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Nova
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Re: Addendum- Character and Fitness
All you need is something like this:
During my freshman year, I was cited for having an empty bottle of liquor in my dorm room. The bottle was my roommates, and I was unaware of the policy against empty liquor bottles. I took an online educational course about the effects of alcohol to remedy the incident. I take full responsibilty for violating the policy.
During my freshman year, I was cited for having an empty bottle of liquor in my dorm room. The bottle was my roommates, and I was unaware of the policy against empty liquor bottles. I took an online educational course about the effects of alcohol to remedy the incident. I take full responsibilty for violating the policy.
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CO2016YEAH
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Re: Addendum- Character and Fitness
Nova wrote:All you need is something like this:
During my freshman year, I was cited for having an empty bottle of liquor in my dorm room. The bottle was my roommates, and I was unaware of the policy against empty liquor bottles. I took an online educational course about the effects of alcohol to remedy the incident. I take full responsibilty for violating the policy.
Yep. It's not Part II of your personal statement. Short and sweet. State the instance in a matter of fact tone. Acknowledge it was an error in judgment. State your punishment and that (if) you completed it and made your restitution. Move on.
A lot of people have made mistakes. You need not be overly apologetic; you need to acknowledge (disclose) and make briefly clear that you learned and righted the wrong.
