Come bash this PI PS--is it too political? (Happy to trade) Forum

Anonymous User · Post by **Anonymous User** » Mon Nov 05, 2012 3:16 am

Thanks to everyone who commented or sent me comments, you were helpful

. I'm deleting it now to keep it from adcomms. Anyone else curious to see my PS or critique it, just send a PM to Cicero76 (no need for anonymity anymore haha).

mmbt123 · Post by **mmbt123** » Tue Nov 06, 2012 10:56 am

I thought it was very good -- good coherent narrative and well written.

fruitoftheloom · Post by **fruitoftheloom** » Tue Nov 06, 2012 7:06 pm

Good, just make sure you capitalize senator when it's Senator XXX

WhiskeynCoke · Post by **WhiskeynCoke** » Tue Nov 06, 2012 8:15 pm

Don't change a thing. It works, is interesting, and will suit your audience quite well. Even though you get a bit political, I think you handle it well and stick to the issue without polarizing the audience. Pretty much everyone can agree theres a lot wrong with healthcare. Most academics lean liberal anyway, so you're good.

Great PS

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