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Anonymous User
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CanadianWolf
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Re: Please critique this introductory paragraph
At first glance, it appears to be a bit too short.
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CanadianWolf
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Re: Please critique this introductory paragraph
To be blunt, I believe that most, maybe all, US law schools require one's PS to be written in English.
If you are a thesaurus salesman, this is an excellent piece, but if you want to be a practicing lawyer, then you need to be able to communicate your thoughts in a more clear fashion.
If you are a thesaurus salesman, this is an excellent piece, but if you want to be a practicing lawyer, then you need to be able to communicate your thoughts in a more clear fashion.
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Re: Please critique this introductory paragraph
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Re: Please critique this introductory paragraph
That wasn't very blunt.CanadianWolf wrote:To be blunt, I believe that most, maybe all, US law schools require one's PS to be written in English.
If you are a thesaurus salesman, this is an excellent piece, but if you want to be a practicing lawyer, then you need to be able to communicate your thoughts in a more clear fashion.
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CanadianWolf
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Re: Please critique this introductory paragraph
Okay. Then: To be tactful, ....
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