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Anonymous User · Post by **Anonymous User** » Sun Oct 28, 2012 5:39 pm

Thank you for reading.

Anonymous User · Post by **Anonymous User** » Mon Oct 29, 2012 1:02 am

Come on. 50 views and no replies?

bettercallsaul91 · Post by **bettercallsaul91** » Mon Oct 29, 2012 6:39 am

CanadianWolf · Post by **CanadianWolf** » Mon Oct 29, 2012 9:19 am

I wouldn't change a word. This is an outstanding & very effective PS, in my opinion. Apply above your numbers with confidence.

EttaJ · Post by **EttaJ** » Mon Oct 29, 2012 9:47 am

CanadianWolf wrote:I wouldn't change a word. This is an outstanding & very effective PS, in my opinion. Apply above your numbers with confidence.

I concur. You write in a way that is touching, and I think it stands strongly as is. Although I empathized with you, somehow you avoided sounding like you were looking for empathy. I was compelled to read the whole thing; you kept me wanting to know more.

I wish you the very best for your cycle!

eyescream · Post by **eyescream** » Mon Oct 29, 2012 10:48 am

really good statement. i don't think there's too much ethos because the subject of the story requires it.

great subject and great presentation. good luck with your cycle.

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