PS Draft: It has action, drama, suspense! Forum
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PS Draft: It has action, drama, suspense!
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Re: PS Draft: It has action, drama, suspense!
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Re: PS Draft: It has action, drama, suspense!
Too wordy. Try to write in a more succinct fashion. At best, this should be viewed as a rough first draft.
P.S. False advertising ? Couldn't find the action, drama or suspense.
P.S. False advertising ? Couldn't find the action, drama or suspense.

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