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eyescream · Post by **eyescream** » Tue Oct 09, 2012 6:01 pm

Thanks for the help!

eyescream · Post by **eyescream** » Wed Oct 10, 2012 9:30 am

Just a bump. Be as brutal as possible. If anyone wants to swap statements, feel free to send me one.

suzige · Post by **suzige** » Wed Oct 10, 2012 9:42 am

nice... reminds me of my own experiences in the newsroom

Maybe add something about what happens in that case involving the drunk cop or at least address what doesn't happen.

Also, throw in the actual headline on the newspaper where u talk about being the only paper with the source. Makes it more real. But don't add it here if ur looking for anonymity.

eyescream · Post by **eyescream** » Wed Oct 10, 2012 12:08 pm

Good suggestions. Thanks much for them.

eyescream · Post by **eyescream** » Wed Oct 10, 2012 8:57 pm

Gunna bump one last time before the night's over then I'll hit up some rewrites. Thanks again.

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