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hellohi

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Hows this DS about being Arab American? First draft

Post by hellohi » Mon Sep 24, 2012 9:54 pm

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Re: Hows this DS about being Arab American? First draft

Post by FattyMcFatFat » Mon Sep 24, 2012 10:08 pm

I won't comment on grammar or anything like that, but I really like the point/concept of the fourth paragraph.
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Re: Hows this DS about being Arab American? First draft

Post by Richie Tenenbaum » Mon Sep 24, 2012 10:11 pm

I really enjoyed the content. I'll let others offer specific grammar suggestions/fixes.
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Re: Hows this DS about being Arab American? First draft

Post by hellohi » Sat Sep 29, 2012 10:41 pm

Thanks for the positive feedback guys, I'm glad you like the content.

Does anyone have any grammar tips?
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