PS for critique! I am doing Pre-law in Mumbai Forum

[Brady199]

yashranade2005@hotmail.com

[bmore]

This is not a personal statement (though if Cornell wanted a why Cornell essay, you might be able to use an excerpt). Law schools don't want to know about your law classes or law experience. They want to know about you. And being an Int'l student, you certainly must have some interesting topics you couls talk about. Pleae review threads about good personal statements. Then let the good folks here edit your grammar. Good luck.

[Brady199]

I was under the impression that all that came under the diversity statement!

[bmore]

I was under the impression that all that came under the diversity statement!

Huh?? Talking about "you" is diversity???? I am not alluding to the "diverse" you. Please look for thread about what makes a good personal statement. BTW, if you are an int'l student it is very likely your personal statement will show some/your diversity but that is not necessarily the same thing as a diversity statement.

OK, maybe it is too early for me to communicate correctly. I'll step aside and let others help you.

Good luck.