I wrote the first draft of my personal statement two days ago and was hoping some of you could take a look and give me some feedback. It deals with why I want to do international law. I did not follow a template or anything, so that is why I think a look would be helpful.
I mostly want help on the ideas and such, since this is a first draft and the grammar, etc. is obviously not perfected yet.
Anyway, let me know and I'll PM you
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