A PS about Story-Telling. Help, please! :) Forum
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Miss_Sunshine
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A PS about Story-Telling. Help, please! :)
Deleted. If you would like to look it over and provide constructive feedback, send me a PM. Thanks!
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stargazin
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Re: A PS about Story-Telling. Help, please! :)
I think it's great and unique.
Answers to your questions:
-I think choosing two concrete instances like you have is better than briefly mentioning many
-No, not too abstract
I don't have any suggestions...great job!
Answers to your questions:
-I think choosing two concrete instances like you have is better than briefly mentioning many
-No, not too abstract
I don't have any suggestions...great job!
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Miss_Sunshine
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Re: A PS about Story-Telling. Help, please! :)
Thank you, stargazin!
I felt pretty solidly about my diversity statement and addendum, but for some reason, the personal statement is so mystical that I wasn't certain I was walking the right path.
I'll keep the draft up for a few more hours, so if anyone else wants to pipe in... I'd like you (it's a deep like, though) forever!
I felt pretty solidly about my diversity statement and addendum, but for some reason, the personal statement is so mystical that I wasn't certain I was walking the right path.
I'll keep the draft up for a few more hours, so if anyone else wants to pipe in... I'd like you (it's a deep like, though) forever!
